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My first instinct was to say that this point oughtn't be made. The description is convincing of the need for this change, though.
I think that the point being made should be moved to a following paragraph, though. I think it interrupts the intro of Freedom 0 just as it's gaining momentum.
Also, I would replace "compatible with software freedom" with "to improve, rather than detract from, software freedom for all users". That may eliminate the need for the parenthetical.