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Andrew Engelbrecht - 9 years ago 2014-12-21 00:22:44
sudoman@ninthfloor.org
move long parenthetical text out of short sentence

it's easier to read this way.
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@@ -4857,9 +4857,10 @@ found that for higher-end hardware, the profit made from proprietary
 
software licensing fees is negligible. The real profit is in the hardware,
 
but it is essential that software be stable, reliable and dependable, and
 
the users be allowed to have unfettered access to it. Free Software, and
 
GPL'd software in particular (because IBM can be assured that proprietary
 
versions of the same software will not exist to compete on their hardware)
 
is the right choice.
 
GPL’d software in particular, is the right choice. For instance IBM can be
 
assured that proprietary versions of the their software will not exist to
 
compete on their hardware.
 

	
 

	
 
For example, charging a ``convenience fee'' for Free Software,
 
when set at a reasonable price (around \$60 or so), can produce some
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