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Bradley Kuhn (bkuhn) - 9 years ago 2014-12-21 01:04:56
bkuhn@ebb.org
Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".

I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in
this sentence is a useful one. However, the entire sentence reads even
worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string
of words in the middle of the sentence.

This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem.
It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
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@@ -178,8 +178,9 @@ Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how
 
this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@.
 

	
 
Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.''
 
Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free
 
Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
 
Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software
 
by the name ``Free
 
Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
 
  Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at
 
  \url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.},
 
 those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side
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