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Denver Gingerich - 9 years ago 2014-11-07 15:54:25
denver@ossguy.com
Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec
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@@ -302,10 +302,10 @@ investigator seeks to take actions that reasonably technically knowledgeable
 
users would during the ordinary course of their acquisition and use of
 
products.  As such, the investigator typically purchases the device on the
 
open market to verify that distribution of the copylefted software therein
 
complies with binary distribution requirements(such as those
 
complies with binary distribution requirements (such as those
 
\tutorialpartsplit{discussed in \textit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and
 
    Related Licenses}}{discussed herein \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} and
 
  \S~\ref{GPLv3s6}}.
 
    Related Licenses}}{discussed here in \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} and
 
  \S~\ref{GPLv3s6}}).
 

	
 
% FIXME: Above is my only use of \tutorialpartsplit in this chapter.  I just
 
% got lazy and that should be fixed by someone.
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@@ -315,8 +315,8 @@ complies with binary distribution requirements(such as those
 
Therefore, the investigator first purchased the TPE-NWIFIROUTER through an
 
online order, and when the package arrived, examined the contents of the box.
 
The investigator immediately discovered that ThinkPenguin had taken advice
 
from \S~\ref{offer-for-source} in this guide, and have chosen to use
 
\hyperref[GPLv2s3a]{GPLv2\S3(a)} and \hyperref[GPLv3s6]{GPLv3s6}, rather an
 
from \S~\ref{offer-for-source} in this guide, and had chosen to use
 
\hyperref[GPLv2s3a]{GPLv2\S3(a)} and \hyperref[GPLv3s6]{GPLv3s6}, rather than
 
using the \hyperref[offer-for-source]{problematic offer for source
 
  provisions}.  This choice not only speeds up the investigation (since there
 
is no CCS offer to test), but also simplifies the compliance requirements for
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